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Showing posts with label Writing2016. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing2016. Show all posts

Monday, 12 December 2016

Book reading



Clifford was at the beach and he wanted to jump in the sea but there were lots of people  doing fishing. Clifford had a idea. All of the people that were doing fishing went on Clifford's back and the people that are doing fishing caught a lot of big fish when Clifford was swimming far. There was a storm coming up to Grandma's house but Clifford came to saves grandma’s house. Thank you to all the teachers that read us stories today.






Tuesday, 6 December 2016

My Year

My best year on my iPad was doing fiafia and swimming. Swimming I was the best at 
Swimming and I Was good like a swimming. Fiafia was fun and I was in the 
Hip hop. In hip hop we do cool dance. There was three cool dance.
The three dance”s name”s are Lydia and antzel and precious they
Dance on the  stage. Lydia and antzel and precious dance cool
In 2015 it was cool and fiafia is fun and cool. In fiafia I saw najari 
Jump on the trampoline and he turn to do a front flip and najari got it.
When it was the other to have a turn. They jumped and front flip 
And it was cool.

Monday, 28 November 2016

Making mousse

WALT:  We are learning about the changes in matter.  
 
What ingredients did we need to make mousse? 
Milk and mousse spoons and cup 

What happened when we added the ingredients?
When you put the mousse powder  inside the milk 
It stayed on on the top but when we mixed it the
Mousse dissolved.

What did we learn?
We learn how to  make mousse on Mundy and it was fun we drink the mousse and the mousse.









Tuesday, 25 October 2016

The river

When the Tiger went to get drink he saw a shark and the shark tried to eat the tigre. When the tiger saw the shrek. The tiger ran away from the shrek. The shrek was going to jump up but when the shrek  jump up  he was scared to jump because the Tiger went to get the rest of the tiger.

Friday, 21 October 2016

Yeast

Room fifteen made a yeast. The yeast is like kaka and the small yuck. Room fifteen had a turn the ingredients. The ingredients were warm water then Sugar and then the yeast when you put the yeast you will put it in the jar. Whenever you smell in the yeast the yeast will be smell it will smell yuck. When it get night you will put the jar somewhere warm in your house

Thursday, 20 October 2016

The cave

Once upon a time there was a cave it was scary and spooky in the cave there was a dragon was in the cave and the dragon was a sleeping in the cave. When the dragon woken up and the dragon was a boy his name was tj. Tj was jumping up and down. When tj a sew a never dragon and tj was in love with her. When she went past him she came back to tj and she said hi tj said what is your name she said my name… My name is cj I like your name it a cool name. When they met they saw fifteen grizzly bears tj and cj don't got kill some of the bear don't got kill they ran for the dragon bets TJ and Ci had bat in the cave.



Tuesday, 11 October 2016

Congratulations Ozzy!

This post is a copy of a post which appeared on the Room 15 Class Blog, celebrating Ozzy winning the school wide Hiwi the Kiwi writing competition!  Well done Ozzy, I was really impressed at the effort and enthusiasm you demonstrated during this task - Mrs Belt!

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Last term we enjoyed having Hiwi the Kiwi visit Pt England School.  There was a school wide competition to win a fishing rod.  To participate, learners needed to write a story about the messages that the Minstrel delivered during his show.  It was awesome that Ozzy from Room 15 won the prize.  Today he collected his reward - we're looking forward to hearing about all the fish that Ozzy catches.



Here is Ozzy's competition winning writing along with the picture he carefully created in his own time at home:

If you go fishing at the beach you will need to buy five sunscreen. You have to take your life jacket and a fish ruler to measure the fish. When you catch a fish you will have to put it in the bucket  with ice and you will have to get some of the saltwater. You will need to put your glove on. When you hold the fish with your fish glove you will need to put a wet towel under the fish so it doesn't get bad. It is important  to make sure  the seagulls do not eat the plastic. Take the plastic away from the seagulls and if you see plastic in the water you will need to get it. In the water scare the seagull and do not kill it with a bucket of water.  Only scare it with your water blaster gun if you have one scare it.


Wednesday, 14 September 2016

Ozzy

This is me running in the cross country win we started the race. When he said go I ran fast as I can.

Tuesday, 13 September 2016

Gold medal

Once upon a time there was a gold medal. Someone was trying to steal the gold
medal.  the bird  was trying and trying hard to get the gold medal. It flew  up and down on the road it work hard and hard to get the gold medal. His name is Tj and Gm was the goods swimmer in the world and he win the gold medal. He was in the car with his dog   and baby and car. When the bird called out to the all the other bird and the bird came and got it the birds flew away Tj get the gold medal and  he put it in his own cool dox that his dad gave him the cool box when he was five. 

Friday, 9 September 2016

Iet's go eels

yesterday in the hall   Assembly Room fifteen went to the hall and the whole ptengland school.we learned all about eels. Room  fifteen had fun in the hall. When we saw a men working across the hall. He even made a song up it is called sweet love a love a and I like  his song. was mabe  up in the kitchen when he was cooking in the kitchen.we learned a lot of eels. We have to make shore  the sea is safe. It is important to make sure the eels are safe.


Tuesday, 30 August 2016

My Dictation - A Day In The Life

I have listened to my teacher on my iPad and tried to write the sentences I can hear.

Today I wake up in a hotel in Rio Brazil. It is going to be a special day because Iam raceing in the Olympics marathon. To standt my day is to eat a healthy breakfast.

Friday, 26 August 2016

Hiwi the kiwi

If you go fishing at the beach you will need to buy five sunscreen. You have to take your life jacket and a fish ruler to measure the fish. When you catch a fish you will have to put it in the bucket  with ice and you will have to get some of the saltwater. You will need to put your glove on. When you hold the fish with your fish glove you will need to put a wet towel under the fish so it doesn't get bad. It is important  to make sure  the seagulls do not eat the plastic. Take the plastic away from the seagulls and if you see plastic in the water you will need to get it. In the water scare the seagull and do not kill it with a bucket of water.  Only scare it with your water blaster gun if you have one scare it.

Monday, 22 August 2016

Lisa carrington

Lisa carrington got a gold and dron madlat the Rio Olympic. Today she will kayak New Zealand. 


Wednesday, 17 August 2016

Fencing

In 1896 fencing became an Olympic sport. The athletes use three kinds of swords. The foil, the epee and the sabre.

Tuesday, 16 August 2016

Usain Boit

Today we are going to run 100metres in a race. To win the race I need to train and train hard then you are going to came first then I’ll got first and first then I will be first and I will be first and came first in the 100metres race then I will be the first in the whole world like Usain Bolt 

Friday, 29 July 2016

The Olympic flame


The Olympic flame started in Greece.  At the Olympics they shot the flame into the cauldron. The girl and man in the boat had a flame and they shorts it the Sky When it night time. The flame short in lot of countries.i like When it shorts in the olden days. I really liked the movies. I like the One That shot  the arrow and the arrow went up and up flying and flying in the big torch. When it got in the torch. When it got in the torch the fire started to come up and up it got big and big it grow and grow big it was the biggest fire in the world. 


Monday, 25 July 2016

Immersion assembly

 Today Room 15 went in the hall my favourite One was team three. team three was the favourite. I like family feud because if  you  lose you get One strike if you get another One wrong then you get two strike. Me and my Dad can run fast and we can swim fast to.

Friday, 8 July 2016

Term 2 reflection




What do I know? What did I do this term?
This term My and my buddy  went to the Art Gallery. MAORi people.

What do I feel about this?
What did I like? 
the Art gallery because I like MAORi people.

How would I judge this?
What did I find hard about this?
I found helping my friends quite hard.

What are the positive things about this? 
What are the good points about it?
class dojo is the good points that my favourite thing.

What other ideas can you think of?
What other things would you like to do?
I would like to do my best at the hard work next term.

What have I learnt?  What will I do next?
I can  help tidy up our classroom when my teacher tells me to.  



Wednesday, 6 July 2016

Art gallery

Today room 15 went to the Art gallery I saw some of the Maori people like Maori people that have Strong Muscles. In the Art gallery me and my  buddies we went to look at the year 5 Superheroes. The  Superhero was cool and funny was fun with my buddie.