On Monday Morning Mr Moran Writing Group went outside. We had fun. We did Relay race obstacle course. We was versing the Girl and the boy was run and the girl was running at the back of the boy. It was fun when we was versing the girl. The boy was going to win dut the girl win kis they was all lot of boys and they was sanm girl. The boy was going when it was the last boy.
Monday, 27 March 2017
Friday, 17 March 2017
Rollercoaster
1st Sentence: What do you see walking up to the ride?
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On a sun Day I was skipping up to the ride.
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2nd Sentence: How do you feel?
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As I ran to the line I had butterflies in my tummy.
I felt nervous as I skipped across the bridge to the line.
As I crept to the line I felt like I was in danger.
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3rd Sentence: Waiting in line.
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When I was Waiting in the line. I was Waiting and waiting in the line
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Monday, 12 December 2016
Book reading
Clifford was at the beach and he wanted to jump in the sea but there were lots of people doing fishing. Clifford had a idea. All of the people that were doing fishing went on Clifford's back and the people that are doing fishing caught a lot of big fish when Clifford was swimming far. There was a storm coming up to Grandma's house but Clifford came to saves grandma’s house. Thank you to all the teachers that read us stories today.
Tuesday, 6 December 2016
My Year
My best year on my iPad was doing fiafia and swimming. Swimming I was the best at
Swimming and I Was good like a swimming. Fiafia was fun and I was in the
Hip hop. In hip hop we do cool dance. There was three cool dance.
The three dance”s name”s are Lydia and antzel and precious they
Dance on the stage. Lydia and antzel and precious dance cool
In 2015 it was cool and fiafia is fun and cool. In fiafia I saw najari
Jump on the trampoline and he turn to do a front flip and najari got it.
When it was the other to have a turn. They jumped and front flip
And it was cool.
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Thursday, 1 December 2016
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