Friday, 8 September 2017

Cross Country run.

Cross Country
It is important to remember to catch your reader’s attention when you are writing and to hold it using descriptive details that are interesting.

Spend some time thinking about how you felt at the beginning of the Cross Country race, while you were waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “GO!”

Using this sentence starter, begin writing here:
As I stood at the starting line, waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “Go,”  I felt as if…   

when the year 4 boy went to do the run i was feeling scared when we went for the run. When mr Burt said go i went running to mr moran so when i went past the park i ran my fastest  to the Finish line. When I  got there I felt cool and Come dowe.

My Rocket Ship Adventure

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My Rocket ship has two wing and one thruster. It can Teleport another planet like Uranus and Jupiter and station. It power can boost up out to special. It can zoom out somewhere else in special. When you are on your only one in the Rocket ship you can pole the rope and you can Wish for something. You can wish for your toy to came or you can wish for your family too came a board.

When I was walking on the walkway I got in the Rocket ship and I got my close and I put them on and I got in the Rocket ship. I went in and I cow-down to 3. I countdown to 3 and I went zooming out of Earth Into space. When I got to space I saw fire coming out of the boost. It was so cool because  I was floating in space.

When I got to space I saw the sun and star that was around me. I was  excited to be in space for the first time. I saw plant like mercury and venus and I saw me going far far far away for home. It was cool being in space Because you have friends with you and you can fly because there's no gravity in space and I like it and it made me live in space.

Friday, 25 August 2017

tirp to stardom

Recount Writing with Paragraphs -
Our Stardome Trip


We will talk about how we are going to craft this recount together.

Our Moon is Special

There are many moons in the solar system, but none are like Earth’s. Mars has two tiny moons, called Phobos and Deimos. Jupiter has 67 moons, and they’re all different shapes, colours, and sizes. Saturn has 62 moons, and dozens more tiny moonlets amongst its golden rings. But on Earth, we have just one and we simply call it the Moon.


You need to write four paragraphs about your trip to the Stardome. They need to have a
topic sentence,
three details,
and a concluding sentence.

Remember! This is a recount - you need to describe what happened on your trip in order.

What did you do, see, and learn during each part of your trip?

To help you, there are some topic sentences to start off each paragraph.

Start writing here:

Yesterday, all the Year 3s and Year 4s got on a bus to go to the Stardome. When we got at the stardome we went in inside and saw same game. One of the games was legos that was in special in a rock ship. There was same thiny that you have to poul it down and they you wall see it come up.

At the Stardome, we learned some really cool things about our solar system. Our solar system have 8 plaint. The closest one is mercury.
It is very hot and has no water or air and doesn’t have a moon.
Its year is only 88 day  this is how long it take to revolve around the sun.

When we weren’t in the Stardome, we were having fun outside.
I went on the flying fox. When I got on I went so so farst that It was so so cool.

After all this, we headed back to Point England School.
We were tired when we got back off the bus. The only ones that were tired was me and sivanneh. We got off the bus and we went back to class

After you are finished and have proofread, have this checked by Mr Moran, Mrs Moala, or Mr H, and post this to your blog.