Friday, 8 September 2017
It is important to remember to catch your reader’s attention when you are writing and to hold it using descriptive details that are interesting.
Spend some time thinking about how you felt at the beginning of the Cross Country race, while you were waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “GO!”
Using this sentence starter, begin writing here:
As I stood at the starting line, waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “Go,” I felt as if…
when the year 4 boy went to do the run i was feeling scared when we went for the run. When mr Burt said go i went running to mr moran so when i went past the park i ran my fastest to the Finish line. When I got there I felt cool and Come dowe.
My Rocket ship has two wing and one thruster. It can Teleport another planet like Uranus and Jupiter and station. It power can boost up out to special. It can zoom out somewhere else in special. When you are on your only one in the Rocket ship you can pole the rope and you can Wish for something. You can wish for your toy to came or you can wish for your family too came a board.
When I was walking on the walkway I got in the Rocket ship and I got my close and I put them on and I got in the Rocket ship. I went in and I cow-down to 3. I countdown to 3 and I went zooming out of Earth Into space. When I got to space I saw fire coming out of the boost. It was so cool because I was floating in space.
When I got to space I saw the sun and star that was around me. I was excited to be in space for the first time. I saw plant like mercury and venus and I saw me going far far far away for home. It was cool being in space Because you have friends with you and you can fly because there's no gravity in space and I like it and it made me live in space.