Friday, 20 October 2017


we are learning Franciscans

immersion Assembly

Immersion Assembly

Welcome back! Who is excited for this term? We are going to leap into writing by creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!
WALT: plan for our writing

When we plan, we need to think about:
  • Who our audience is.
  • How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
  • How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
  • How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.

Step 1: Brainstorm.
What you could include:
  • Descriptive words
  • Ideas for a hook
  • Key things you can remember from the assembly
    • What you enjoyed
    • What made you laugh

Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).

Step 3: Write your recount!
Transition Words
Past tense
At first…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly!

If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.
When you are ready to post on your blog, use the pictures in our Pav Media Folder.

On one S First we went to the hall and  when we set Dowe Mr Biret and Mr J and mr Sambal was singing a song in front of the school. They were singing  musical Madness. When it was Funniest the singing we went to do team 1 movie. Team one was About  what it feels like to listen to music. And then we went to team 2 movie. Team 2 movie was singing a song and we Move to team 3 movie. Our movie was About Favourite song that you  like. The next one was team 4. Team 4 movie was  listening to any song and then the next team was team 5. Team 5 was Watching The Lion King movie. When they was Watching it the first one was ok but when it was the next one it was Scary that was Finished we watch Mr J little cousins playing his band and when assembly was Finished we went to class and we was Writing About what We did in the hall for a  Assembly.