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Monday 3 July 2017

The Taniwha
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Use descriptive words.

We are going to write 3 paragraphs (3-5 sentences) about these ideas:

-What do you see (all of the picture)?
-Describe the Taniwha.
-What can you hear/smell?

When I was walking into the big long tall grass. I saw a big fierce creature that was the biggest fierce best. It was so big and so scare and it had a long rough tail and it had a stog stog  big long pointy horns it had a lot of horns. The best had 12 big horns . It had a sharp teeth. The fierce creature was a best. It was making noiz like this rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr the best was not .  We was running and running it was looking for  me. That fierce best was the taniwha.
I can hear the best. It was strong and it was power fall. I can small the taniwha poo.







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