The Waka
We are going to write about this image, remember what we talked about this morning.
Describe the setting, use descriptive words. Write about your voyage in the waka to the land you are searching for.
When we walk up we put the waka on the sand. I can see the people getting ready to get , in the waka. When they got in the waka they went and made a lot of splash, in a sea gast like a warhol . when the splash sotp a big big waves was smashing down to the sea the waves was crashing into the waka and more came a lot of big cashing I can smell the sand and the dog.The dog small like seit water, became it look like it have been in the sea. The dog was barking and barking. When the dog, was barking and baring the chief was speaking to his people .I can hear the water splashing in the sea, like it is a big big waves crashing smashing in to attack the people and me. When the water get big and big it men at it is a big attack, and you need to go somewhere where it is safe for the people to have a, good day. In the morning we went to get the waka again to go back to they village far far far far away for home. They went on the waka and they went to home. They did not make it became, they die some of the people was a live but some was die became they was 2000 people on the waka. This is the people die 100 of people. When the people die they was looking for the village and one of the men saw the village and he saw the village the village I saw the, village and when he saw the village he went to go and tall all of the people to go back to the way saw the village so he went to look, for the chief. He saw the chief and he said to him chief I saw the village we went pat it. The chief said to the people to go back and the people saw the village. or home is back.
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